Novel Update 2.0

I finally have something I can work with but wow I did not realize how demotivated reading my own work would be. In an effort to give myself a break from coming up with ideas, I have decided to proofread my work instead. 

The work was terrible, it was a huge mess and the plot was everywhere, I kept repeating similar words and phrases, I started adding comments and highlighting different sections with coordinating colours for it's respective issues. yellow would be inconsistency, green was for repetition, pink for errors in general and blue for blending issues. 


I've taken to writing down said repeating words in addition to highlighting them over the course of proofreading this. In addition, I've come to the realization that I have a very small collection of vocabulary, but on the bright side since the novel is targeted at the general public, my use of basic words is great! 


*Wow, who knew that helplines were so useless. I tried calling a professional just for some one on one counselling and all she told me was to do what I was already doing, I have no words*

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